Everything

This is my first chapter of my first story.
Tell me how it is, please leave real comments and critiques.
If you don't tell me what's wrong, I can't fix it, THX!!!
ENJOY! btw throughout  the story listen to Dangerously In Love. It is what inspired me to write.

"Onika!" Safaree called
"What the hell is you yellin' for?!" responded Nicki
"Cause you wasn't listening, I called you 6 times"
"Okay, now what?"
"I forgot"
"You know what, I can't deal with you right now."

Both Safaree and Nicki were bored driving around trying to find something to do when they rode past a movie theater.
"Faree, I wanna go to the movies."
"Nicki, you know what that's gonna cause if you go in there."
"I know but, I don't care maybe we'll see some barbs"
"Okay but if we get attacked, you better hold ya own. cause I'm gettin the fuck on"
"Whatever Safaree, if you leave me just know that you won't be getting what you were supposed to get tonight"
"What might that?" SB said as he pulled into the parking lot of the movie theter.
"If you leave me, you'll never find out." Nicki replied as she waited for SB to come open her door.
As SB helped Nicki out of the car he thought about how soft her hands were and how they felt roaming his body as they made love. How so much pleasure came from those soft little hands, he would never understand.
"Ummm, are we just gonna stand here holding hands or are we going to go into the theater?"
"My bad babe"
They walked into the movie theater and as they were getting tickets the cashier looked up and her eyes became as big as golf balls and she let out a little squeal. Nicki then placed her finger to her lips saying "SHHH"
"OMG, HB!!!"
"Hey barb, keep it down I wanna see a movie not be the movie" said Nicki through chuckles.
"Sorry but Nic omg, I've waited for this moment for so long. I just didn't expect it to happen at work"
""Don't worry its okay, what's ya name?"
"Kylie"
"Well, what tie do you get off Kylie"
"4:30"
"Okay its 2:55 now so maybe when the movie's over we can go somewhere?
"Is that a serious question, because if so why would you ask me a question you already know the answer to?""
"Look who's sassy"
"But yes HB! You know I'm not gonna be able to do any more work for the this last hour, right?"
"Just don't get fired" said Nicki as she winked and walked away

When the movie finished Nicki looked around for Kylie, extremely sneaky. When she finally found Kylie, Nicki, SB and Kylie hopped in the car and pulled off.

*****

After Nicki and SB dropped Kylie off at home they were on their way to Nicki's house. Once they arrived at Nicki's house, they sat down on the couch and cuddled, as they cuddled SB fell asleep. When Nicki realized that SB had fallen asleep, she looked at him and when she looked at him she thought about how much she really loved him. She thought about how he had been there from the very beginning. Through all of it, he had her back. She thought about how he put his rap career on the backburner and put hers to the forefront. She thought about how sometimes her attitude could push everyone away but he was always the one that calmed her down she was about to snap. whenever she would get to a point where the slightest look her way could set her off SB could just wrap his arms around her and everything would be just fine. SHe loved him unconditionally and she knows that he loves her too.

"I love you Safaree..."